Wednesday, 5 September 2018

Bulling poem

I have been making a bulling poem to hopefully stop bullying people and kids that little and smaller than them to stop them calling them names I had to write a poem put on a slide show film it on screencastify then record myself saying it 

2 comments:

  1. Hi Morgan my name is Nikhil and I go to Waikowhai Primary School. This poem realy discrbed what a bully would act like, but I think you used the words 'hurt me' to much. Maybe next time you could make the words rhyme more. I loved the way you used sceen castify. If you want to visit my blog go to https://wpsnikhilg.blogspot.com/.

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  2. Hello my name is Walid I liked the bullying poem and now maybe no-one will bully anyone else. I hope so.

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